Mary wrote this piece of persuasive writing to remind us all that Glenbrae School is the best. She has a clear introduction which states her point of view and then three examples to support her idea. Well done Mary, just like you are proud of the school, I am proud of you!
You can read more of Mary's work on her blog: gbsmaryp.blogspot.co.nz
Glenbrae school is the best.
Glenbrae school is the best school in the world because we are good at sports, we are digital learners and we keep our school beautiful.
I like sport because of the lovely netball tournament games that we have played. Also Kiwi Can have games at school for us. We also have Kiwi Sport that we go to on Tuesday mornings. What we play in kiwi sports is baseball, octopus, touch, athletics and basketball.
I love learning with digital tools because we learn more and more of stuff like math, writing, reading and we used our netbook for IXL Maths and for reading and writing. We make lots of movies and diagrams by using our netbooks.
I love keeping our school beautiful because when visitors come to our school they will love it.
I love my school and I am proud of it.
